I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Great job on your blog post. I think you did a wonderful job sharing your work. Maybe next time you could add pictures to go with your work but anyways great job and keep up the good effort.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Talofa Lava Aolelei,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on your blog post. I think you did a wonderful job sharing your work. Maybe next time you could add pictures to go with your work but anyways great job and keep up the good effort.
-Shriya from Rm11