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Thursday 26 November 2020

Aolelei TeeJay Compare and contrast.


Last week we did Compare and Contrast  our work. But my one was a autumn and Tee Jay one was a 
tornado so what we did is that we have to write difference kind of story.
    

Monday 23 November 2020

Sun & Me.


Today we were making up our own story but my one was about me and the sun.

This week we were working on our Analysis and like make up our own story

Wednesday 4 November 2020

My texts about the Sea

 Find your own videos, articles and stories about the sea! 

Fill out this table to compare and contrast the mood and atmosphere of these texts. 


Name + Author

  1. Abstract nouns

  • Concrete nouns

  • What did they do 

    Across the sea by Hone Rata 

    Sun

    wind

    Carefully

    Promise

    sweet

    Voices







    Fire

    people

    boat

    Face

    Fish

    Stomach




    They used fire because it's for them to cook food

    So they dont starve.


    Water is a great thing because when they want to drink they can fill the bottle with water,


    Fish is a thing that you can use to cook food for your family.


    A boat is an object that holds people over the water and across the sea.


    Wind is an intangible which is what you can't touch but what you can feel.




    Mood: 

    Cold

    Loud

    Sleepy

    Calling 





    Atmosphere: 

    Water

    Wind

    trees

    ocean

    Waves

    Sun




     


    We are working on finding language features. Next time we will look at what effect they have.  We found the language features "abstract noun and concrete noun" 

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    Tuesday 15 September 2020

    Thursday 23 July 2020