I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
It's me Shriya from room 11, I like how you guys work together as a team and put things about being safe. Being safe online is our job so we don't get bullied or get any random texts. Great Job, Keep it up.
Talofa Lava Aolelei, Wow! I really like the colours you chose on this blog post! They stand out nicely and are very eye catching. I also liked your pictures! Next time to be better, you should add a caption to tell everyone what this blog post is about. :) Which one of these statements do you agree with the most and why? Great Job, Roseena
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Talofa Lava Mara-lee, Violet and Aolelei
ReplyDeleteIt's me Shriya from room 11, I like how you guys work together as a team and put things about being safe. Being safe online is our job so we don't get bullied or get any random texts. Great Job, Keep it up.
Talofa Lava Aolelei,
ReplyDeleteWow! I really like the colours you chose on this blog post! They stand out nicely and are very eye catching. I also liked your pictures! Next time to be better, you should add a caption to tell everyone what this blog post is about. :) Which one of these statements do you agree with the most and why?
Great Job,
Roseena
Thank you for you comment on my work.I appreciated.
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