I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia Ora Aolelei! It's Amanda from Room 9 and I'd like to compliment on the colors you've selected to present your work, It's really easy to read because sometimes people put dark colored font on a dark background. One of the things I'd like suggest is that you should center your work and add some speech marks when a character is talking....That's all for today.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Aolelei! It's Amanda from Room 9 and I'd like to compliment on the colors you've selected to present your work, It's really easy to read because sometimes people put dark colored font on a dark background. One of the things I'd like suggest is that you should center your work and add some speech marks when a character is talking....That's all for today.
ReplyDeleteThank you,
Amanda