I am a Year 8 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 10 and my teacher is Peta. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hey there Aolelei, you have such a beautiful name... Id like to congradtulate you on such an outstanding presentation, I like the way you included phrases and photos of yourself... It is great to see that you are experimenting with many different colours and tools to add detail to your work...
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hey there Aolelei, you have such a beautiful name... Id like to congradtulate you on such an outstanding presentation, I like the way you included phrases and photos of yourself... It is great to see that you are experimenting with many different colours and tools to add detail to your work...
ReplyDeleteKa Pai Aolelei,
Ma te wa!
Jada